Letter of approval (PIS) starts with “I” and I don’t know who “I” is. ie, no name before signature at bottom. Should it be the supervisor- hard to determine from the content as it suggests the researcher. And the researcher’s name is first at the top of the letter. Says “a researcher’ then ‘my research’. Needs to be changed. CHANGE THIS. Is this in English or translated? Is the interview in English and translated? STATE THIS. 7. PIS does not state the counseling services that are available should participants need help. STATE THIS. Later the PIS states translated by a third party. Who is this? Australian or other? STATE THIS States participants can get results, but earlier it says only people interviewed can get results. CLARIFY THIS Is there anyone inside KSA who people can make a complaint to if required?